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Notes for lines 2951-end ed. Hardin A. Aasand
For explanation of sigla, such as jen, see the editions bib.
3814 Mine and my fathers death come not vppon thee,5.2.330
3815 Nor thine on me. <Dyes.> 3815
1784 Davies
Davies
3814 Mine . . . thee] Davies (1784, p. 142) : <p. 142>“Laertes had justly purchased his own death by his treacherous conduct; Hamlet could have brought no guilt on his head on that score. Had he said, indeed,— ‘My father’s and my sister’s death Come not on thee,—’ he would have been more consistent. Laertes is not a favourite with the audience or the actors.” </p. 142>
1790 mal
mal
3815 Malone (ed. 1790, 9:437): <p. 437>“Laertes’s death and the queen’s are truly poetical justice, and very naturally brought about, although I do not conceive it so easy to change rapiers in a scuffle without knowing it at the time. The death of the queen is particularly according to the strictest rules of poetical justice; for she loses her life by the villainy of the very person, who had been the cause of all her crimes.” </p. 437>
1793 v1793
1793=mal
3815
1803 v1803
v1803=v1793
3815
1813 v1813
v1813=v1803
3815
1819 cald1
cald1
3815 Nor thine on me] Caldecott (ed. 1819) : “We here find Laertes, who was not wounded till after Hamlet, first dying of a poison, described as singularly quick in its operation; and advising Hamlet, who is made to support a conversation some time afterwards, of a danger, of which he was not then aware. The purpose of the drama might require that Hamlet should survive, and that the same, i.e. the same quantity or degree of poison, may affect different habits differently; but the poison of the ‘anointed’ sword, which had first entered the body and was steeped with the blood of Hamlet, must, one would think, in the second instance, have lost something of its active quality, and would consequently have been more slowly operative upon Laertes. “
1821 v1821
v1821=v1813
3815
1832 cald2
cald2 = cald1
3815
1870 Abbott
Abbott
3814 Mine and my fathers death] Abbott (§238): “Mine, hers, theirs, are used as pronominal adjectives before their nouns. That mine should be thus used is not remarkable, as in E.E. it was interchangeable with my, and is often used by Shakespare where we should use my [cites 3814].”
1877 v1877
v1877 = cald2
3815 Nor thine on me] Furness (ed. 1877): “Possibly Ham. gave Laer. a mortal thrust in return for the ‘scratch,’ which was all that Laer. was aiming at. So that Laer. dies of the wound, Ham. of the poison.”
1881 hud3
hud3
3815 SD] Hudson (ed. 1881): “Laertes also dies of the wound, not of the venom.”
1885 macd
macd
3815 Nor thine on me] MacDonald (ed. 1885): “His better nature triumphs. The moment he was wounded, knowing he must die, he began to change. Defeat is a mighty aid to repentance; and processes grow rapid in the presence of Death: he forgives and desires forgiveness.”
1982 ard2
ard2
3814 come] Jenkins (ed. 1982): “subjunctive.”
1985 cam4
cam4
3814 Edwards (ed. 1985): “This is a wish or prayer, not a statement: ‘Let not these deaths be visited upon, or charged to thee!”
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