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Notes for lines 2951-end ed. Hardin A. Aasand
For explanation of sigla, such as jen, see the editions bib.
3722-3 Laer. This is to heauy: | let me see another. 
3724-5 Ham. This likes me well, | these foiles haue all a length. <Prepare to play.>
1754 Grey
Grey
3725 foiles haue all a length] Grey (1754, 2: 309): <p. 309> “There was a proclamation in Queen Elizabeth’s reign (in the year 1579) for the length of swords and daggers, which Shakespeare might probably allude to. See Strype’s Annals of Queen Elizabeth , vol. 2. p. 602. Upon this proclamation, the French ambassador was stopped at Smithfield Bars , by the officers who sat there to cut swords exceeding the length prescribed by proclamation, in the year 1580. Strype , vol. ib. . 619”
1770 Gentleman
Gentleman
3725 Prepare to play] Gentleman (1770, I:30): <p. 30> The last scene, if there are two good fencers, (which by the bye seldom happens) must please the eye considerably; yet such a slaughter of characters must cloy the most sanguine critic that ever thirsted for theatrical blood-shed, and pity must extend very far indeed, to attend even the expiring hero of this piece with any degree of patience.” </p.30>
1796 Goethe
Goethe
3725 Prepare to play] Goethe (1796; rpt. 1989, 4:6:132) : <4:6:132> “Wilhelm and Laertes and this time began to practice with a theatrical end in view. They wanted to perform the duel in which Hamlet and his opponent come to such a tragic end. Both of them were convinced that, in this important scene, one shouldn’t just lunge back and forth clumsily, as happens in most theaters; they were hoping to provide a model of how one could make the scene into a spectacle that any knowledgeable fencer would respect. Everyone gathered round. They both fought with vigor and intelligence, and the interest of the spectators increased at every bout.” </p. 132>
1819 cald1
cald1
3724 This likes me well] Caldecott (ed. 1819) : “See II. 2. King.”
1832 cald2
cald2 = cald1
3724 This likes me well]
1870 Miles
Miles
3725-47 Miles (1870, pp. 82): <p. 82>“Hamlet justifies the sinister calculation on his innate nobility of soul. [cites 3124-6 ‘he . . . foyles’]
“He asks but one matter of course question: [cites 3725-6, 3739-47]” </p. 82>
1870 Abbott
Abbott
3725 a length] Abbott (§81): “A was used for one in such expressions as ‘He came with never a friend, ‘ &c.”
1872 cln1
cln1
3724 This likes me well] Clark & Wright (ed. 1872): “See [2.2.80 (1106)].”
1877 v1877
v1877 = cln1 w/o attribution
3724 This likes me well]
v1877 ≈ Abbott
3725 a length] Furness (ed. 1877): “For instances of ‘a’ being used for one, see Abbott §81. Also [Rom. 2.4.187 (1300-01)]: ‘Doth not rosemary and Romeo begin both with a letter?’ Compare the Scotch ‘ae.’”
1882 elze2
elze2
3725 a length] Elze (ed. 1882): “After these words [F1] adds the stage-direction: Prepare to play.”
1885 macd
macd
3723 MacDonald (ed. 1885): “—to make it look as if he were choosing.”
macd
3725 MacDonald (ed. 1885): “—asked in an offhand way. The fencers must not measure weapons, because how then could the unbated point escape discovery? It is quite like Hamlet to take even Osricke’s word for their equal length.”
macd
3725 Prepare to play MacDonald (ed. 1885): “Not in Q.”
1885 mull
mull
3724 Mull (ed. 1885): “I like or suits.”
1929 trav
trav
3722 Travers (ed. 1929): “This must be the ‘little shuffling’ foreseen by Claudius IV, vii, 137-138 [3127]). How the fact that one foil was ‘unbated’ can have escaped 0sric (innocent, it seems, 1. 305 [3782], of any knowledge ‘foul practice,’))is not explained in the text, Sh. most likely counting on the excitement and good will of his audience to make it pass unquestioned. The ‘anointing ((IV, vii, 140 [3131]), Laertes apparently does so swiftly and cunningly not to attract notice, while ‘preparing to play.’”
1934 cam3
cam3
3725 Wilson (ed. 1934): “Rapier-blades at this time might vary in length from 3 ft. 8 in. to 5 ft. 5 in., and the length was supposed to give an advantage in thrusing (v. Castle, Schools and Masters of Fence, pp. 319-30 and Plates I, 12, VI, 7, 8). But Ham.’s enquiry is perfunctory; he does ‘not peruse the foils’ (cf. 4.7.133-35).”
cam3
3725 SD Wilson (ed. 1934): “F1 ‘Prepare to play’— a direction, I take it, not only to Ham. and perhaps Laer. to don the mailed gloves, breastplate, etc. (v. end of note l. 222 [3674-76] S.D. above), but also to the attendants to prepare a suitable arena. The K.’s net speech shows that flagons of wine are brought in at this point (not at l. 222 as F1 directs) and placed on a side-table while cups are set on some table or stand at his side. Poe (Sh. in the Theatre, p. 174) suggests that one of the cups already contains the poison. This would make the attendants accomplices. The poisoning was done by means of the ‘union’ in a fashion all the more effective that it was left to the imagination of the audience (cf. Creizenach, Eng. Drama, p. 219 for poisonings in other plays). Moreover, though the K. says ‘give me the cups,’ it is clear from ll. 269-70 that he uses one only.”
1939 kit2
kit2
3723 Kittredge (ed. 1939): “Laertes picks out the unbated and poisoned foil.”
kit2 ≈ standard
3724 likes] Kittredge (ed. 1939): “pleases, suits.”
1947 cln2
cln2
3723 Rylands (ed. 1947, Notes): “At this moment, while Osric turns to answer Hamlet’s question, we may suppose Laertes selects in exchange the unbated weapon. While Claudius gives commands to the attentive court about the wine and the healths Laertes can anoint the sword-tip unnoticed. There is no need to make the butterfly, Osric, a party to the plot.”
1974 evns1
evns1 ≈ standard
3724 likes]
evns1
3725 a length] Evans (ed. 1974): “the same length.”
1980 pen2
pen2 ≈ standard
3723
pen2 ≈ standard
3724 likes]
pen2 ≈ standard +
3725 a length] Spencer (ed. 1980): “From surviving rapiers it seems that the length of the blades varied considerably. Hamlet’s question increases the suspense by suggesting that he may, contrary to the King’s expectation (IV.7.135), inspect the weapons and so discover the plot.”
1985 cam4
cam4 : contra cam3 [n. 3715]
3723 Edwards (ed. 1985): “Wilson [n. 3715] supposes that Osric is an accomplice. It is quite incredible that Claudius and Laertes should have admitted anyone else into their plot—least of all the young waterfly! Whatever ‘shuffling’ is done to get the poisoned and unbated foil into Laertes’ hand is done by himself.”
cam4 ≈ standard
3724 likes]
1987 oxf4
oxf4 ≈ cln2
3723
oxf4 : Abbott
3725 a length]
1988 bev2
bev2: standard
3724 likes me]
1992 fol2
fol2≈ standard
3722-3 Mowat & Werstine (ed. 1992):”Here Laertes selects the sharpened, poisoned rapier.”
3724 Mowat & Werstine (ed. 1992): “I like this.”
fol2
3725 Prepare to play Mowat & Werstine (ed. 1992): “fence.”
1993 dent
dent ≈ standard
3724 likes]
dent ≈ standard
3726 a length]
3722 3723 3724 3725