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Notes for lines 2023-2950 ed. Frank N. Clary
For explanation of sigla, such as jen, see the editions bib.
2833 Giues me superfluous death. A noise within.4.5.96
1934 rid1
rid1
2833 superfluous death] Ridley (ed. 1934): “i.e. many mortal wounds.”
1982 ard2
ard2
2833 superfluous] Jenkins (ed. 1982): “Since one would have been enough.”
1984 chal
chal ≈ ard2
2833 superfluous] Wilkes (ed. 1984): “as one hit would suffice.”
1988 bev2
bev2
2833 Giues . . . death] Bevington (ed. 1988): “kills me over and over.”
1993 dent
dent: xref.
2833 superfluous death] Andrews (ed. 1993): “Enough blows to kill me many times over. The literal meaning of superfluous is ‘overflowing’, and that sense will prove applicable not only to Claudius but to ‘poor Ophelia’ [4.5.84 (2821)].”
1999 Dessen & Thomson
Dessen & Thomson: xrefs.
2833 noise] Dessen & Thomson(1999): “the roughly 130 examples [of SDs] are typically linked to sound from within . . . . See Q2 [4.5.110, 153 (2849, 2903)]; F1 2851, 2904; and Q1 CLN 1724.”
Transcribed by BWK. .
2006 ard3q2
ard3q2
2833 Gives. . . death] Thompson & Taylor (ed. 2006): “i.e. kills me many times over.”

ard3q2: 2904-5, 3154 xref; Dessen & Tomson
2833 Thompson & Taylor (ed. 2006): “This is the first of a series of offstage noises of alarm or distress preceeding an entry: see Ophelia’s entry at 151 [2904-5] and the Queen’s at 4.7.160 [3154]. Within is a common stage direction (Dessen & Thomson find 800 examples) indicating the location of a sound or figure within the tiring-house and there fore offstage for the audience. Our practice is to retain within where it occurs in the early texts but to use offstage when we are adding a modern [stage direction].”
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