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Notes for lines 0-1017 ed. Bernice W. Kliman
For explanation of sigla, such as jen, see the editions bib.
730 With witchcraft of his wits, {with} <hath> trayterous gifts,1.5.43
1790 mal
mal
730-1 wits . . . wit] Malone (ed. 1790): “The old copies have wits. The subsequent line [with wit] shews that it was a misprint.”
Ed. note: Though Malone had said that Q2 should not be changed “without very strong reason,” he offers no strong reason in this instance. His “ * ” code for this note indicates that it was an after thought.
1793 v1793
v1793 = mal
730-1 wits . . . wit]
1803 v1803
v1803 = v1793
730-1 wits . . . wit]
1813 v1813
v1813 = v1803
730-1 wits . . . wit]
1821 v1821
v1821 = v1813
730-1 wits . . . wit]
1880 Tanger
Tanger
730 with Tanger (1880, p. 125) ascribes the variant in F1 as “probably due to the critical revision which the text received at the hands of H.C. [Heminge & Condell], when it was being woven together from the parts of the actors.”
1929 adams
Adams
Capture his CN directly; I own the book and need to continue beyond scene one.
1929 trav
trav
730-1 Travers (ed. 1929) notes “the alliterative balancings,” a second instance of the specter’s rhetorical play. See also 691-2.
1934 Wilson
Wilson MSH
730 wits] Wilson (1934, p. 299), continuing from the discussion of 111, <p. 299> considers wits one of four instances of Sh.’s own confusion of singular and plural forms. </p. 299> <p. 300> He thinks it is “obvious” from the next line that Sh. meant wit. </p. 300>
1939 kit2
kit2
730 witchcraft of his wits] Kittredge (ed. 1939): "Claudius, then had a keen intelligence (wit) and seductive gifts of mind and manner. Cf. [Oth. 2.3.372 (1500)]: ’Though know’st we work by wit, and not by witchcraft.’ But Claudius’s wit is witchcraft: he has bewitched the Queen."
1950 Tilley
Tilley
730-2 With . . . seduce] Tilley (1950, W 704 [re gifts]; W 588 [re wit]): “Women are tempted by gifts [. . . ] 1590 R. Wilson Three Lords and Three Ladies Lond., s. E2v: Women weake are tempted soone with giftes.” There is witchcraft in fair words c1570 Marr. Wit and Science III i s. B4v: Fayre wordes are wont oft time, fayre women to allure.”
1982 ard2
ard2: analogue
730 witchcraft] Jenkins (ed. 1982): “Cf. Antonio’s Revenge (3.5.8-9), where the Ghost of Andrugio ascribes his wife’s defection to the ’black incarnate fiend’ who trips her faith ”

ard2: kit2; //
730 trayterous gifts] Jenkins (ed. 1982): “Kittredge understands ’gifts of mind and manner’; but possibly ’presents’, which did what ’natural gifts’ 731 could not. Cf. in H5 the ’treacherous crowns’ (2nd Prol.22), which a traitor claims ’did not seduce’ (2.2.155).”
1985 cam4
cam4
730 gifts] Edwards (ed. 1985): "talents (see ’natural gifts’, [738] below). Claudius uses his gifts reasonably, as he uses his wits to bewitch."
1987 oxf4
oxf4: Tilley
730 trayterous gifts] Hibbard (ed. 1987): "‘Women are tempted with gits’ was proverbial (Tilley W704)."
1988 bev2
bev2: standard
730 gifts] Bevington (ed. 1988): “(1) talents (2) presents.”
2006 ard3q2
ard3q2: standard
730 wits] Thompson & Taylor (ed. 2006): “Most editors emend to ’wit’ to match the singular in [731].”

ard3q2: xref; //
730 gifts] Thompson & Taylor (ed. 2006): “often glossed as ’natural gifts’, i.e. personal qualities or talents, which is clearly what it means at [738], but the more obvious meaning of ’presents’ could also be acceptable here and is supported by TGV 3.1.89 (’Win her with gifts, if she respect not words’) and indeed by the SD for the dumbshow at [2000-2].”
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