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Notes for lines 0-1017 ed. Bernice W. Kliman
For explanation of sigla, such as jen, see the editions bib.
584 Giuing more light then heate, extinct in both1.3.118
1791- rann
rann
584 extinct in both] Rann (ed. 1791-) paraphrases: “which both go out.”
1854 del2
del2
584-5 extinct . . . making] Delius (ed. 1854): “Wahrend das Gelöbnis noch gethan wird, erlöschen solche Aufloderungen schon.” [Even while the vow is being made, such fires are already extinguished.]
1856 Badham
Badham
584 extinct in both] Badham (1856, p. 283) suggests <p. 283> extinct in birth, instead of extinct in both.’” </p. 283>
1870 rug1
rug1 del2 without attribution
584 extinct . . . making] Moberly (ed. 1870): “These passions go out as regards both light and heat even in the very moment when the promise is being made. (‘The young man’s wrath is the light straw afire.’)
1873 rug2
rug2 = rug1
584-5 extinct . . . making]
1877 v1877
v1877: Badham
584 both]
1885 macd
macdrann without attribution
584 extinct in both] MacDonald (ed. 1885): “—in both light and heat.”
1947 cln2
cln2: standard
584 extinct in both] Rylands (ed. 1947): "their light and heat at once extinguished."
1980 pen2
pen2
584 extinct in both] Spencer (ed. 1980): “both the light and heat of which are extinguished.”
1987 oxf4
oxf4: standard gloss + R2 //
584 extinct] Hibbard (ed. 1987): "extinguished, quenched. Compare [R2 1.3.221-2 (514-15)], ‘My old-dried lamp and time-bewasted light Shall be extinct with age and endless night.’ "
1992 fol2
fol2: standard
584-5 extinct . . . a making] Mowat & Werstine (ed. 1992): “i.e., both the light and the heat of such blazes die out almost as soon as they appear”
2006 ard3q2
ard3q2: standard
584-5 extinct . . . a making] Thompson & Taylor (ed. 2006): “the promise of both light and heat vanishes even as it is being made.”
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