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Notes for lines 2951-end ed. Hardin A. Aasand
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3129 Requite him for your Father.4.7.139
1773 gent
gent
3129 Requite . . . Father] Gentleman (apud Bell, ed. 1773): “This treacherous plot upon the life of Hamlet, is truly villainous on the part of his Majesty, and pitifully mean in Laertes, though he has lost a father; for no revenge can be just, that is not open and manlike; it is a bad feeling of the human heart, in its best shape: what must it be, in the worst?”
1870 Miles
Miles
3127-39 Miles (1870, 69-70): <p. 69>“Hamlet is exalted over the mere man of animal courage and passion, not only intellectually and physically, but morally too. The reckless ‘darer of damnation’ is unfortunately ready to dare dishonor too. The King might have spared himself the pains of feeling his way so nicely how far in villainy he could venture without shocking his man. They are both of a mind, although the master villain is the King: [cites 3127-31; 3150-53]</p. 69> <p. 70>
“Thus thickens the plot: in the foregound, the two conspirators, vindictive, eager, aggresive; in the distance, with Horatio, the great defensive avenger, moving ghostlike to his doom and theirs!” </p. 70>
1875 Marshall
Marshall
3128-39 Marshall (1875, pp. 85-6): <p. 85> “This scheme of Claudius is not so elaborate as we might have expected after such a long preamble; perhaps he purposely moderates its atrocity, being not quite sure how far he might go. He is soon reassured as to any doubts he </p. 85> <p. 86>might have felt regarding the willingness of such a pattern of chivalry, as Laertes, to stoop to any treachery; for to the temper’s comparatively simple plan of using an ‘unbated’ foil, the tempted adds the complex villany of anointing its point with a poison so deadly the slightest scratch from it would be fatal. . . . [see n. 3142-45]
“I have dwelt thus at length upon this scene both because it is of the greatest importance to follow it carefully before attempting to form any judgment of the character of Laertes, and because I believe it to be one of the most carefull elaborated scenes, as far as Shakespeare is concerned, in the whole play. The bare skeleton of it in the Quarto 1603 [Q1] shows us what great pains he has taken in the revision of it; and there is one important alteration which I cannot but hink shows, more than anything else, what Judgment Shakspeare intended us to form of Laertes. In the older version the King makes his proposal thus: ‘When you are hot in midst of all your play, Among the foyles shall a keene rapier lie, Steeped in a mixture of deadly poyson, That if it drawes but the least dramme of blood, In any part of him, he cannot liue;’ so that the idea of the poison does not come from Laertes, a circumstance which lessens his guilt in no little degree.” </p. 86>
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